Munkey
Number of posts : 969
Age : 33
Location : Lafayette, La
Registration date : 2009-01-27
Points : 6703
 |  Subject: "SEERS"  Sun Aug 15, 2010 1:01 pm | |
| This is the second song of a three song series I'm writing. The first song, "WATCHERS", can be found here. I always appreciate critiques and criticisms, as well as feedback about my work, so don't hold back if you want to comment. SEERS
Detest, defy, define
Boundaries only inhibit the limited self
Suppress, swallow, seize
Perception: the unwavering solution to every problem
Recognize, rehash, replenish
Consciousness: the everlasting incarnation a boundless ego
What separates a god from man?
Time--man's greatest adversary
An encompassing force keeping him
From the purity of perfect unity;
The unconquerable behemoth holding him back
From the wisdom of past knowledge
Abolish the confines of time
Destroy any perception of self
Incinerate once present bounds
Focus; channel; execute
Breathe into being a spectacle no other eye shall see
Master of mind, not mastered by the mind
Witness for yourself autonomy in its purest sense
Gnothe seauton; know thyself |
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TheBeastSlayer
Number of posts : 2165
Age : 32
Location : Kingdom of God,State Of Delusion, USA
Registration date : 2009-03-26
Points : 8121
| | Subject: Re: "SEERS" Sun Aug 15, 2010 1:21 pm | |
| Very good bro. I like it.  |
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